Read Sorcery 101 writer notes Chapter 5 part 4

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Chapter 5 part 4

Title page

Super big flashing title page since this is mostly a fight.

page 306 – 312

So they all cramp into a tiny car. Mostly cause it’s funny to pick on Pat.

Danny looking over the weapons and mentioning there being no gun is cause it won’t occur to Pat to own a gun since he used to be a magic and could shoot lightening and what not. Then once he was a vampire he stole all his weapons from Suryu. But in this situation Danny really would have done better with a gun. Especially, since he can’t lift the ax. Note that later Aaron mostly uses a shot gun for a lot of the same reasons Danny could have used one here.

page 313 – 325

This whole fight, is to show just how experience Pat is in a fight. He doesn’t talk much and makes sure to keep an eye on what’s going on. Ally can mostly take care of herself so Danny gets most of Pat’s protection. Danny who’s a heavy smoker on the other hand can’t.

Pat also thinks fast to about using his surroundings with the table. And his stabby ice spell is French not Latin this time around, cause spells can be anything that isn’t your native language.

Demon leader isn’t dumb. He immediately goes for the weak link in the team. But he didn’t know about Rita who while timid isn’t incompetent.

This whole fight ran pretty long. I try not to do fights or scenes this long anymore. Updating 3 times a week while this was running means this fight took up most of the month.

page 326 – 328

Ally and Cal fights once again. To give us more hints of Cal being in trouble.

page 329 – 333

Pat’s back to his usual grumpy self, being all unhappy about taking help from the “wrong” types of supernaturals. Also, Pat’s very handy with getting blood out of clothes. That’s something a vampire should know.

I like Danny’s face when he asks Trish if it’s Seth’s hair that makes her like him. Also this is the only time Pat laughs in the comic I think. The idea of Seth being a “Nice guy” is just so weird.

Trish giving Danny something to think about though.

Brad doesn’t shave when Ally’s not home. He caused the fire by getting distracted by something and leaving the room. That’s the real reason he shouldn’t cook.

page 334

I loved drawing this page. I always like nice backgrounds where I have time to put in all the details. Liberael was Pat’s angel. So Cal’s got to go report in on all of this.

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