Here is another batch of writer notes on Sorcery 101. If you want to read ahead on these got ahead on these head over to my patreon.
Title Page
Since chapter doesn’t really have a plot, it’s more transitional so those are always hard to come up with title pages for. It’s kinda eh in my opinion.
page 992 – 993
Kayla running from the wolf demons was fun to draw, mostly cause as I said I like to draw busy streets.
page 994 – 997
Not much to say here since it’s mostly an exposition dump. Alex is clearly better at giving werewolf advice than Brad since she actually talks to other werewolves and wolf demons. I also like that she calls Brad weird to his face.
page 998 – 1005
Will’s roof, Will’s rules. I never really went into it in detail but Will is a bit sketchy. His rent is mostly paid by cheating the lottery. So Pat is pretty justified in calling him creepy, even though nothing happens beyond Will’s remark about making cute girls happy.
I had a lot of fun with Kayla and Pat in their shared room. I wanted the whole scene to be awkward and Kayla rightfully worried that everything she is doing is annoying Pat. And I like the description of Pat’s shirt as non-threatening.
page 1006 – 1008
Here I again wanted it to be clear that Danny knows but wants them to fess up on their own. Connor is much better at keeping his cool and being smooth with lies. All of Jeff’s panicked faces were fun to draw.
page 1009 – 1011
The snow on the ground is starting to melt cause it’s started to warm up a little. Also no visible breath.
Pat’s whole earth spell lesson doesn’t go well. I never said it in the story but a few readers figured it out. Pat was an air mage, so earth spells are his weakest area. Also, a lot of folks thought I was gonna have Kayla and Pat hook up because he finds her distracting. I considered it, but I decided that Pat’s too messed up and still has issues being touched. Then his last chapter with Suryu would just make that worse. So this isn’t the time for him to try anything like that.
